Media Assessment 1: Learner response

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 Learner Response:

Total: 14            Grade: 4

WWW- You start very well here so plenty of potential to build on. Exam technique is the key to opening up the top grade. 

EBI- Annotating the unseen text will help you write more for Q3/12 mark questions. Question focus: this cost you in Q6. 

LR: 
1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).

2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question: 

Q1: 1/1
Q2: 1/1
Q3: 5/12
Q4: 2/2
Q5: 3/6
Q6: 2/8 

3) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.

Question 3 is one of my stronger questions because I spent time thinking about what to write and I didn't rush it. 

4) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.

Question 6 is my weakest because I didn't read the question properly 

5) Finally, write a new, detailed paragraph for Question 3 - the unseen text 12 mark question. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure you refer to the text and write in detail. 


In the advert promoting Beyoncé's new perfume she is wearing a red low cut dress. The colour red has connotations of confidence and heat. Beyoncé is also standing in a very provocative pose which catches the audiences eye making them pay closer attention to little details and make assumptions about what the perfume could possibly smell like. The colour red has connotations of wealth and domination. Furthermore, Beyoncé promotes her perfume by using catchy lines like “catch the fever” this line could be linked to love and romance because when you think of a fever it usually has the colour red involved somewhere. This will attract women and young adults looking for love and romance. 




























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